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What would it be like
To be you for a day?
To know what makes you smile
And what makes your nerves fray
To know what you know
And feel what you feel
If your heart is full of love
Or if it is made of steel
To have all your memories
Especially the bad
To know what you've lost
To know what you had
What you hope
And what you fear
What you've learned
And what you hold dear
To understand a bit more
Of what makes you you
What would it be like
To be in your shoes?
©2007-2009 ~Gingerbread1814
:icongingerbread1814:

Author's Comments

General poem. I don't really like it. You get the point, but I think for a poem about understanding what can be hard to understand, it's a bit too simple. Maybe I'm overly critical.

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